Archive for December, 2008

Chesterton’s Christmas poem

Friday, December 26th, 2008

Christmas Poem

G.K.Chesterton

There fared a mother driven forth
Out of an inn to roam;
In the place where she was homeless
All men are at home.
The crazy stable close at hand,
With shaking timber and shifting sand,
Grew a stronger thing to abide and stand
Than the square stones of
Rome.

For men are homesick in their homes,
And strangers under the sun,
And they lay their heads in a foreign land
Whenever the day is done.

Here we have battle and blazing eyes,
And chance and honour and high surprise,
But our homes are under miraculous skies
Where the yule tale was begun.

A child in a foul stable,
Where the beasts feed and foam;
Only where He was homeless
Are you and I at home;
We have hands that fashion and heads that know,
But our hearts we lost—how long ago!
In a place no chart nor ship can show
Under the sky’s dome.

This world is wild as an old wife’s tale,
And strange the plain things are,
The earth is enough and the air is enough
For our wonder and our war;
But our rest is as far as the fire-drake swings
And our peace is put in impossible things
Where clashed and thundered unthinkable wings
Round an incredible star.

To an open house in the evening
Home shall all men come,
To an older place than Eden
And a taller town than
Rome.
To the end of the way of the wandering star,
To the things that cannot be and that are,
To the place where God was homeless
And all men are at home.

Student Writing Contest

Thursday, December 11th, 2008

The NEW Whidbey Island Student Writer’s Contest has begun!  A new timeline and new prizes, the Student Writer’s Contest is for grades 6 through 12 and is open now. The deadline is January 15.

See Student Writer’s link for more info. Now you know what to do over the holidays! 

And I’m bound and determined to finish The Destiny Stone, third book in the Wolfproof Trilogy. Now if there wasn’t so much wrapping to do…Where are the elves when you need them?

Exploring the story—first draft

Friday, December 5th, 2008

 

What’s the difference between a first draft and a revision? My students hate to revise they think it should all fall into place the first time pen goes to paper. Ok, they’re willing to concede that you need to go back and check on punctuation, grammar, spelling, but shouldn’t the story have all come out in the first draft?

 

I’m 2/3 of the way through the first draft of the 3rd book in the WP trilogy, tentatively titled, The Destiny Stone, DS for now. Somewhere just after 1/2 way and before 2/3rds,  I realized the story had veered severely from my original outline. A character came out of a store on an icy street in Edinburgh and literally slid into Jessica knocking her down and sending her sliding into her friends Sarah and Timothy. The result was a nasty tangle of arms, legs and scarves, and a new and unexpected character in the plot line. A rangy ginger-haired boy in a camel coat, several years older than my main characters.  He’s charming, funny and immediately likeable, but does he belong there?

 

I’ve had to ask my self some serious questions. What purpose will he serve in the story? How will he advance the storyline? Will he add further complications, and if so, do those complications distract from or add to the major conflict?

 

It also means I may have to change the order of events. That means going back and rewriting a few scenes. This is what first drafts are about. Finding your way through the maze of the story. And that’s usually through a moving story, full of unexpected twists and turns.

 

Revision is more settled. You take the long view of the whole story. Does it hold together, does it work?  You look at voice, rewrite scenes, add and subtract, but you are working within the boundaries of an existing story. That’s one difference between the first draft and revision.

Visiting Auntie

Thursday, December 4th, 2008

If you’re in Spokane this weekend, drop by Auntie’s at 2 pm on Saturday for my fantasy map making workshop, Map Your Way into Story.  Auntie’s is one incredible bookstore, with a staff that knows and love books. I subscribe to their newsletter just to read their reviews. Lindsey Reiswig, children’s department, will be my host. Lindsey is a wonderful resource for the best in children’s’ and YA literature.

No surprise–the publishing industry is hurting this year.  One market that holds strong is YA and middle grade. Consider buying  books as gifts this Christmas.

Travelers’ Market book signing will follow the map-making workshop.